WARNING: Readers with weak hearts or very fragile tear ducts please don't read any further.
PAGE 1:
Wordings on top left corner: Kou-ni's -death!!
Sawaki: Now....
PAGE 2:
Nanaya: Now what do we do...
PAGE 3:
Shirogane: In this state, I don't think we can be forgiven even if we apologize. And if this goes on, we'll die...
Akira: If that's so, we'll just have to do our best not to get killed then...
Shirogane: Akira...?
Akira: Unlike me, the two of you have the power. Now let us make use of it and think of a strategy.
PAGE 4:
Akira: While I, will create an 'opportunity'.
Shirogane: How could you be so reckless?!! That's suicidal!!
Akira: Do you wish to be living in miseries while death slowly approaches?
I'm not fooling around! As long as there is hope, we should fight for it no matter how tiny it is.
Nanaya: Indeed... I agree!
Shirogane: Can't you just remain silent for a moment?!
Nanaya: Cheh, he didn't have to be like that...
Shirogane: But... Akira... It's too risky...
You are totally defenceless against her attacks!!!
PAGE 5:
Hiryu: Are you done chit-chatting?
Akira: ...tsk!
Nanaya: Hey, now what? Are we doing it or not!?
Akira: Shirogane! You said you want to claim back a part of Ryuko didn't you?
PAGE 6:
Akira: Then enough empty talk and help us out!!!
PAGE 7:
Akira: Nanaya!
Nanaya: Coming!
PAGE 9:
Akira: Uwah...
Shirogane: tsk...
Really...
Akira: Hurry up!
PAGE 10:
Akira: Shirogane...
Shirogane: You look really pathetic like that!
PAGE 11:
Akira: Faster Shirogane!
Shirogane: Got it!
PAGE12:
Akira: Faster...
I, don't know what will happen after defeating this shadow...
What Shirogane said, about me awakening and everything else... I know nothing about them...
PAGE 13:
Nanaya: Do it now!
We're at our limits already !
Akira: But... I want to know...
Why did it turn into a war?
Why did it ended up like this, to the extent that we have to come here?
And what exactly, is sleeping within my body?
PAGE 14:
Akira: I...
In this world that I knew nothing of...
What am I supposed to do?
Everyone's the same, messing up other people's life as they please...
But when it comes to the important part, none of them can give me an answer...
Instead, they avoid it carefully, and never touch the surface of the truth...
PAGE 15:
Akira: How tactless of them, and how frustrating of that...!
I want to know!
PAGE 16:
Akira: If it's you, you'd respond to me right?!
Ryuko!!
PAGE 18:
Akira: Why? You could avoid my attack back then... And yet why didn't you...?
PAGE 19:
Hiryu: It... doens't matter...
I'm just a container Homurabi-sama created, a mere puppet...
This body... This personality... And even my thoughts... All belong to Homurabi-sama.
But... Only the source of my life... is from a part of Ryuko-sama...
And it seems like... The feeling of wanting to go back to the past... Is the only one that didn't disappear...
PAGE 20:
Hiryu: I'm really grateful, to you for releasing me...
After such a long long time, finally, becoming one again...
Ryuko: And now, the rest shall be entrusted to you...
PAGE 21:
Ryuko: My power and... All the memories...
PAGE 22:
Ryuko: I'll entrust them to you...
If you have the awareness...
As Akira moves on to the next stage, what will be waiting for him in that direction...!?
Afterthoughts:Wordings on top left corner: Kou-ni's -death!!
Sawaki: Now....
PAGE 2:
Nanaya: Now what do we do...
PAGE 3:
Shirogane: In this state, I don't think we can be forgiven even if we apologize. And if this goes on, we'll die...
Akira: If that's so, we'll just have to do our best not to get killed then...
Shirogane: Akira...?
Akira: Unlike me, the two of you have the power. Now let us make use of it and think of a strategy.
PAGE 4:
Akira: While I, will create an 'opportunity'.
Shirogane: How could you be so reckless?!! That's suicidal!!
Akira: Do you wish to be living in miseries while death slowly approaches?
I'm not fooling around! As long as there is hope, we should fight for it no matter how tiny it is.
Nanaya: Indeed... I agree!
Shirogane: Can't you just remain silent for a moment?!
Nanaya: Cheh, he didn't have to be like that...
Shirogane: But... Akira... It's too risky...
You are totally defenceless against her attacks!!!
PAGE 5:
Hiryu: Are you done chit-chatting?
Akira: ...tsk!
Nanaya: Hey, now what? Are we doing it or not!?
Akira: Shirogane! You said you want to claim back a part of Ryuko didn't you?
PAGE 6:
Akira: Then enough empty talk and help us out!!!
PAGE 7:
Akira: Nanaya!
Nanaya: Coming!
PAGE 9:
Akira: Uwah...
Shirogane: tsk...
Really...
Akira: Hurry up!
PAGE 10:
Akira: Shirogane...
Shirogane: You look really pathetic like that!
PAGE 11:
Akira: Faster Shirogane!
Shirogane: Got it!
PAGE12:
Akira: Faster...
I, don't know what will happen after defeating this shadow...
What Shirogane said, about me awakening and everything else... I know nothing about them...
PAGE 13:
Nanaya: Do it now!
We're at our limits already !
Akira: But... I want to know...
Why did it turn into a war?
Why did it ended up like this, to the extent that we have to come here?
And what exactly, is sleeping within my body?
PAGE 14:
Akira: I...
In this world that I knew nothing of...
What am I supposed to do?
Everyone's the same, messing up other people's life as they please...
But when it comes to the important part, none of them can give me an answer...
Instead, they avoid it carefully, and never touch the surface of the truth...
PAGE 15:
Akira: How tactless of them, and how frustrating of that...!
I want to know!
PAGE 16:
Akira: If it's you, you'd respond to me right?!
Ryuko!!
PAGE 18:
Akira: Why? You could avoid my attack back then... And yet why didn't you...?
PAGE 19:
Hiryu: It... doens't matter...
I'm just a container Homurabi-sama created, a mere puppet...
This body... This personality... And even my thoughts... All belong to Homurabi-sama.
But... Only the source of my life... is from a part of Ryuko-sama...
And it seems like... The feeling of wanting to go back to the past... Is the only one that didn't disappear...
PAGE 20:
Hiryu: I'm really grateful, to you for releasing me...
After such a long long time, finally, becoming one again...
Ryuko: And now, the rest shall be entrusted to you...
PAGE 21:
Ryuko: My power and... All the memories...
PAGE 22:
Ryuko: I'll entrust them to you...
If you have the awareness...
As Akira moves on to the next stage, what will be waiting for him in that direction...!?
I REFUSE TO BELIEVE THAT KOU'S DEAD.
No waayyyyyyy!!!! T_______T
How could Sorano-sensei murder him??? That's too cruel!!! After showing us that oh-so-adorably-cute Kou in the last chapter, he's dead nao???? D=
Hiryu's just sad... But what she was exactly?
I'll stop here for now... Needs to go to cry in a corner for Kou... );
AAAAAAA!! Kou is dead!? NO NO NOOOOOOO!! T_______T
ReplyDeleteThank you very much for the translate!!!
ReplyDeleteAnd... and... now I can cry again because I know what they are saying (I was correct about Hiryu's last words( T_T
I REFUSE TO THINK KOU IS DEAD!!! He isn't dissapear!!! He can survive!!!
AKIRA! RYUKO!!! pleaseeeeeeee!!! save him!!!! ;O;
T_____T *Goes to her EMOtive corner*
Uh, I'm the person who was translating the chapters previously aka Fallen Angel/ innoc3nt_sorrow here...
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for the translation even though I can actually read the chapter myself.
I hope that you can continue translating...I was at first quite worried that I had no time to translate due to schoolwork, but I'm now quite relieved as your translations are quite good. (:
Will be crossposting this to the 1chromefactor LJ comm, hope you don't mind.
Thoughts on the chapter:
I refuse to accept the fact that Kou is dead. And then, I'm quite sure that Ryuuko or Akira would save him somehow...
As for Hiryuu, I once thought that she was Ryuuko and Homurabi's secret lovechild for some reason. I used to not feel anything for her, but her death/disappearance is indeed sad.
Still, it's wonderful that Sorano-sensei saves the chapter with a Ryuuko x Akira moment~
Sorry for the long comment, I just uh, felt like it. :P
No prob, it's my pleasure~ =D Feel free to do so. :3
ReplyDeleteLol I used to be (and most of the time still am) a reader of scanlations/translation done by others and one day, I thought, 'all these are possible because those people are working hard to make our lives happy. '
And I realised that I could actually help others as well by doing what I am capable of. As someone who's fanatic about mangas, I truly understand how it feels when you couldn't understand the story or find the scans at all (especially the monthly/bi-monthly series make me suffer everytime I finished reading a chapter... T___T *headdesk* And worse if the series not receiving enough attention... D;)
Anyway, thanks for your comment~ I don't mind it being long and it's a delight to receive it~ xD
Thank you so much for your wonderful work! Me doesn’t understand Chinese/Japanese at all so I have to wait for the marvelous translators work but I don’t regret it because I know you and everyone else give your best. Because after all we all are Monochrome Factor Big fans…
ReplyDeleteWell I was looking at the images in this chapter and good news (at least I’m believing with all of my heart), I'm almost sure Kou isn't death, at least Sawaki didn't pierce his heart right? So, until the author officially his death, I will think Kou is very weak, needing Akira/Ryuko’s help but not death (move your ass Akira, Kou needs you!!). Not at all. ;D I love Kou he’s so cute, don’t want him to die, so I will wait until I can’t deny it anymore! XD
Ja ne everyone
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Hi.. I'm known as KuranYuuki88 in Mangafox.com Hope you don't mind as I using this translation as a part of the Monochrome Factor Spoiler thread forum. Thank you for the translation. Currently, I work hard to learn Japanese as I wanna help translators society and be a part of you guys. Thanks.
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